I began writing quite a few haiku this week, and I've realized, only today, that they tell a story about how I've been feeling, about what I've gone through in the past few weeks... of course, the analogies may seem somewhat obvious to me, I realize they may not be so easy to decipher from an outsider's perspective. Still, let me know what you guys think !
Story Told in Haiku
Trees painted by fall,
Winds steal colored leaves from all.
Thus, jealousy blows.
On cold gust of wind
Dance leaves brown, yellow, and red.
Free Ride for the dead.
Man misunderstood
Bleeds to death on floor of wood.
Grim reaper's painting.
On blue sky canvas
Storm clouds paint a dark promise ;
Anger brings forth tears...
Ink runs when tears perl.
Blotches : happy memories
Meeting tragedies...
In dark stormy sky
Lightning flashes come to die.
Tempest photographs.
Wise stars share the light
Tracing sky maps in the night.
Brilliant teachers.
VolKanO's temper.
A natural disaster
Waiting to happen.
My heart, she held tight ;
Squeezed too hard, ended my plight.
She made me heartless...
Kind fox offers ride
Across lake to scorpion.
Double suicide.
Under snowy plain
The ground slumbers without pain.
Only silent screams...
- Kojiro Silver Nytebird -







je regardais tes photos et je me demandais si tu avais déjà étudié ou lu sur la composition de l'image... Parce que dans mon cours de technique de cinéma, on voit présentement comment 4 principes simples comme les volumes, les formes, les lignes et les arrêtes peuvent changer tout l'effet d'une image... Et, selon moi, si tu arrivait à maitriser ces principes, cela améliorerait énormément l'impact de tes photos...
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If you're not dead yet, it's because you're not living enough...
je regardais les photos pcq je me demandais si tu utilisais c principes ou non pcq je travaille sur ca présentement... et je me demandais si c'était ce qui changeait l'impression que j'ai de tes photos...(probalement que oui) et j'ai ressurgit simplement pour te laisser savoir que ces principes améliorerait ton stock... donnerais une meilleure impression et transmetrait surement mieux les messages des photos... s'il y en a...
If people don't want both comments good and bad.
Critiques of the work.
Then they should disable comments...
And just have a wall.
Well said.. thank you friend.
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-Matthew William
Sorry.. haha.
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-Matthew William
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...from whose bourne,
no traveler returns...
She is indeed 18, to be 19 in about a month, September 19th. Don't you worry, I don't encourage teen nudity either
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If you're not dead yet, it's because you're not living enough...
Then by all means keep shooting.
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...from whose bourne,
no traveler returns...
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If you're not dead yet, it's because you're not living enough...
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